it’s a good thing denethor died when he did. he narrowly avoided getting his ass kicked by his daughter-in-law, who would doubtless be steamed on behalf of her kind-hearted husband over the crappy parenting he received.
I’m now picturing Eowyn dangling Denethor upside-down over the edge of the walls of Minas Tirith and yelling “I SAID APOLOGIZE”
Someone needs to write this…
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rabidchild67 replied to your post “dammit I’ve written myself into a corner…”
That is, the next scene is a day, week, year or whatever later
Time is definitely the issue, but I had to do it the other way, where I went back and changed references indicating that 2 weeks were passing down to just one week, so I wasn’t forced to make two other events happen out of the order I needed.
I managed to fix it last night, so if I get a chance to write again today (maybe at lunch?) I can move forward again.
Thanks for the suggestion!
Hmmm okay, how about: protagonist returns to his homeland to take his rightful place as king??
That could work in another story, but this one’s all democracies.
Rocks fall everyone dies?
Uh, probably not what I’m going for, but thanks. I think I need to change some timing a bit so I can delay something a week or so. No tragic ends required, I think. But I’ll keep this in mind for plan B.
dammit I’ve written myself into a corner…
Hmmm. How to fix this?
let the sprint commence!
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