Hi! WIPs: psicygni is writing a very slow build Spuhura which is amazingly tantalizing. There are a few others which have been updating so rarely that I’ve forgotten them at the moment but when I remember I’ll also then remember to let you know. Did you get enough sleep last night?

hopeforyouyet:

ato-the-bean:

Um… sort of.  But I’m still working tonight (it’s nearly 11) because shit is due and I’ve been writing PBB in the evenings and lunch instead of working.  Ugh.  Good news is I think I finished PBB except for the epilogue, and I outlined and wrote part of that at lunch today.  Bad news is that’s not what I should have been doing.  But muses…

I’m not sure I can read anything but Spirk/pinto/johnlock right now.  I don’t mind Spuhura, as long as it’s in the rear-view mirror.  But if it’s that well written maybe I’ll give it a go.  Once I finish the rest of these slides.

How about you?  Get enough sleep?

🙂 Congrats on getting PBB done (again I’m totally being selfish in being happy that you’re working on it; reality however does make me grimace in sympathy re: having work being due).

Re: what can be read and what cannot – I seem to be wishy washy – I didn’t think I could read Stucky and lo’ and behold I can once in a while. I love seeing Spock in intimate discussions and how he logically approaches things; psicygni’s got his voice down pat. I am in denial about where the fic may be headed because of the timing of the fic (pre-Nero, ?getting close to Kirk cheating) but I could be completely wrong about what her plan is for the next few chapters.

I too have been working late but this is because I was playing earlier and got home at 2230h. I just got my day’s work done and am considering maybe going to bed. Maybe. Mr. Hope just went to bed so I guess I should too; I hate to wake him up as I bounce around to get comfortable. And I am exhausted. I guess I have to stop being a little kid and start getting back into a bedtime routine that makes going to bed easier.

To answer your query, I did not get enough sleep last night although I didn’t suffer from it too much somehow. Gosh, this has become a long response.

Adulting is hard!  Reading or writing instead of adulting is sooo tempting.  I’d say we’ll outgrow it, but I’m pushing 50 and I swear I’m getting worse.  I’m nearly done for tonight, though… it won’t be everything that is due, but most of it, with an apology and promise to follow up with the rest tomorrow.  And I have tomorrow off (though I’ll work some).  So maybe I’ll write some more without guilt.  Or maybe I’ll hide from writing by doing work.  That would be a switch.

mediocre-latinist:

jasonalanclark:

emiibarazakis:

skrulls:

taejira:

pickmanslovelymodel:

also, i really want there to be more vampires and so on who, instead of speaking in a charming, cultured, but vaguely old-fashioned way because they are a 275-year-old consciousness in an undead, unaging 19-year-old body, talk in embarrassingly misapplied or outdated slang and pop culture references in a failed effort to blend in with their apparent peer group

…or who speak pretty normally most of the time, but lapse into saying stuff like “GOD’S WOUNDS, YOU CUR“ when they get upset enough

vampires who got turned 30 years ago and still say “radical”

vampires who just use WAY too much 90s slang. vampires who say “booyah” when they get too excited.

vampires who mix all slang from the past 5 centuries mercilessly within the same breath and don’t even try to stop it anymore.

Unhand me, you egg-sucking, lily-livered, jive-talking, whackadoo. Foul villain! Cur! I bite my thumb at thee, you ugly motherfucker, so hasta la bye bye, daddy-o!

My eyes are bleeding

How would would you recommend planning character arcs?

clevergirlhelps:

Planning character arcs goes hand-in-hand with planning the plot itself. I like doing both at the same time, because the plot affects how the character changes, but, ultimately, the character dictates how the story will end. Or, at least, they should.

  • Start with what will change. You probably have an idea of what the character is like at the beginning. So, what changes? Is it an opinion? Do they rectify a personality trait? If you have what changes and what it changes to, then you have a beginning and an end to the character arc.
  • How will they look in the middle? The middle is the most important part. The character is in the midst of their change, challenging their past opinion/trait while simultaneously holding onto it. What do they hold onto and why? What change do they embrace first and why?
  • Allow them to seek out the change. Normally, people don’t radically change themselves of their own accord. The character may need to be convinced to change via an accidental kidnapping or something equally dramatic. But, ultimately, there’s a point where you need to stop dragging your character through the checkpoints and let them walk there themselves. That’s how you show true change: by letting the character embrace it of their own accord. 
  • How do they change? How is your character most open to being changed? (This is more to help the plot along, but, as I said, the plot and the arc should be intertwined.) Is your character best convinced by conversations with people they trust? Are they best changed by only the most dramatic of circumstances? Will they pretend to change, while the real change takes much longer?

Character arcs are about change, for better or for worse. However, you could do a character arc that begins in the same way it ended, with the character learning nothing at all or discovering the assumptions they had at the beginning of the work were correct all along. Even if this character learns nothing, other characters should change (unless you’re trying to drive home that being a stick in the mud is no way to live).

A good way to show the character has changed is to pose them the same situation at the beginning, middle, and end. Not in-story, mind – although you could do that – but as a drabble or something similar. The situation should compliment their change, e.g. someone afraid of heights having the chance to go skydiving. If you’ve done your job, the character should react differently at each stage of the story. At the beginning, they’d say no, of course. In the middle, they may think about it before ultimately jumping out of the plane and screaming the whole time. At the end, they jump out of the plane without any hesitation.

If you have any other questions, look in the character arc tag

athenasdragon:

I wish that book reviews were presented the same way as fanfiction reviews:

“AFHAKFHDKFHAKHFADSKFHKDFDKJHFKJAD” –The New York Times

“OMG I CANT EVEN WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT TO THEM” –The Wall Street Journal

“you asshole im crying now” –NPR

“AHH THAT WAS SO CUTE THANK YOU! I’ll publish that book I said I’d write for you like next week, I’m a little busy right now but I LOVE THIS” –Sarah Dessen

semper-ama:

ato-the-bean:

semper-ama:

ato-the-bean:

semper-ama:

Okay, I’m breaking out the magic playlist (annnddd the wine). If I haven’t finished this story in, say, two hours, someone throw something at me.

We should sprint!  I have a chapter to edit…

YES, I’m all for it! Although unsure how this will work over tumblr. xD Go now? Check in again at ~40, maybe? ANYONE ELSE WANT TO JOIN US? 10 to 40? Y/Y?

Yes!!!

I wrote 544 words! I’m thiiiiisss close to finished! How did you do, Ato?

I’m almost done incorporating comments.  Just a few sentences to mull over.  I’m definitely posting some Revelations tonight!

semper-ama:

ato-the-bean:

semper-ama:

Okay, I’m breaking out the magic playlist (annnddd the wine). If I haven’t finished this story in, say, two hours, someone throw something at me.

We should sprint!  I have a chapter to edit…

YES, I’m all for it! Although unsure how this will work over tumblr. xD Go now? Check in again at ~40, maybe? ANYONE ELSE WANT TO JOIN US? 10 to 40? Y/Y?

Yes!!!

yaushie:

as much as i love the trope of a character falling fast and hard for someone, i also love the subtle decent where they don’t really think about it; where that person is just kind of there until one day they realize that person is so ingrained in their lives and they cannot do without them. where there is no conscious effort on either ends to become romantically involved but somehow the thought of them being with someone else is disconcerting. where “i enjoy being with you” unwittingly turns into “i want to be with you”